Anybody willing to look over my essay?

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I'm writing a narrative essay.. for school.

And i need a little help to make sure i add the commas and periods in the correct spots.. anybody willing?

I ment willing in the title. LOL.

.. as you can see i suck at that stuff.

 
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Well you have two already but if you need a 3rd, I'd be happy to.

 
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It seems well in hand, but if you need somebody to take a gander in the future, feel free to email me.

 
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Well i already got a few responds, but if you two want to look at it, your more than welcome. lol.


 
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What's this about? I want to read something interesting. I guess I'm too late for the editing, though.

 
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