wow u did great!! she looks like she had cheek implants and a face lift!! its awesome that u achieved this look with only makeup...it amazing the transformation!!
Look at how happy she looks in the after picture - I love it! I think you did a great job, and more than that, you made her feel beautiful which is priceless!
i think you did well, the only thing that threw me off was the color of the eye shadow. i think a more natural earthy tone would look better.. IMO a creamy bronze or even a golden champagne. just my opinion though , i'm an earthy kinda girl =P